this is an intresting piece, kinda a different style of render for you, but that's good i like to see experimentation, shows that the artist is versatile i like the zoomy effect you have going on here, but i think it may have fit better if you added the same type of effect to the brushing as you did to the render, to enhance the effect you were using. the brushing is good, however, and the render is certainly nice, different, but nice... another overall good job